Essay Analysis [William Hazlitt]

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     William Hazlitt wrote a powerful masterpiece titled "On the Want of Money", which was written in the nineteenth century. This work of art is a sophisticated essay in which he clarifies his point that money is the direct cause of greed. The mere concept is that if money is seeked, the efforts will all come down to either success or failure. If you fail, no one is going to be on your side, and if you succeed, people would only praise you for your success and failure. Hazlitt further proves this claim through the use of diction, imagery, and pathos. For example, Hazlitt states, "it is to live out of the world, or to be despised if you come into it" (Lines 3-4). He uses diction in order to convey the meaning that there are simply two statuses in life, one with isolation and one with getting shunned by everyone else if you enter society. His word choice in this line is advanced as to when he develops his meaning, he is discrete about it, and he does not say too much in order to get his point across, which is very brilliant on his side. Another example is when he ironically foreshadowed, "it is to be compelled to stand behind a counter, or to sit at a desk in some public office, or to marry your landlady, or not the person you would wish" (Lines 16-19). This is a clear example of imagery, as for these words aid us to visualize the horror taken place. One would distinctly see why it would be unjust seek money in a greedy manner, since it would only lead to one's own unhappiness if the efforts fail. Money is the center of one's own unhappiness, which leads me to Hazlitt stating, "...with all your pains, anxiety, and hopes, and most probably to fail, or if you succeed, after the exertions of years, and undergoing constant distress of mind and fortune, to be assailed on every side with envy..." (Lines 27-31). The buzz words such as "pains, anxiety, hopes" are a direct representation of pathos since he wants to us relate to how stressful life is, and how no matter how hard everyone works at life, in the end, it does not pay off as well as we'd imagine. Everyone wants to succeed in life, but if it costs you all your sweat and blood, is it truly worth it? I can relate to this essay because ever since I was young, I was selfish for money. My avarice for money only got me in the worst situations possible. I wanted everything, and this only led to my own depression and despair. For example, I'd tend to steal money from my parents, and it was the worst feeling ever. Not only can I relate to this, but I know that everyone else in the world can relate to wanting money as well. Everyone seeks happiness in what they want, not in what they need. This is why money is so important to everyone, because everyone has a want in life, and that want could only be fulfilled truly with money. To prove Hazlitt's claim that money is the direct cause of greed, he uses the three rhetorical devices such as diction, imagery, and pathos; as for he exclaims that the seek for money is a dehumanizing experience, and is only want us selfish humans desire even if it means putting us into a pit of despair.


~Jessica Wong

Advertisement Analysis [Anti-Smoking]

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     The advertisement above was shown to us during class. As you can see, several cigarettes are tied to a clock. The cigarettes look like they are about to be lit up with fire, using a lighter. I can derive from this advertisement, that the purpose of this is to persuade people to not smoke. As simple as it may sound, one advertisement can influence more people than you'd think. The clock in the picture represents a time bomb, which is negatively connotated. This is because once the bomb goes off, everything surrounding them dies, leading to destruction. This alludes to a smoker, since the more cigarettes you take, the higher chance you have of dying; and not only that, the more you smoke, the more it pollutes the air, and everyone around you breathes in that same air. This causes the people around you to get infected with that air, which eventually will have the potential to kill their self, and their family and friends. This advertisement is an appeal to pathos, since this picture tells us that smoking is harmful to not only our body, but to our family and friends, the people that could mean the world to someone. People close to one's hearts can stir up emotions and their feelings and make oneself think to themselves, "Is smoking really worth the risk of harming everyone around me?". I can relate to this advertisement since my father himself is a smoker, however, no matter how many times I begged him to quit, he won't. This shows how addicting nicotine is, and that it deserves to be stopped. The advertisement also uses the words "destroy your future", a negative connotation, which further explains my point that the addiction to smoking can potentially ruin someone's lives, and it will spread to other innocent civilians, specifically the ones closely related to the smoker.

~Jessica Wong